Wednesday, December 1, 2010

MY LIFE IN MALAYSIA

I,am student in mmu university I,am from sudan and
Malaysia is very good because the wheather is wenderful like langkawi Island it has alot of beautiful location,restaurant and the Beach.

1 comment:

  1. Dearest Husam,

    Good to know that you are enjoying your stay in Malaysia ^^ but I wanted 100 words, my friend, this is too short :P Please make sure you edit this post and add more information to support what you say ya ^^

    Please tell me MORE about your life in MMU, whether you are having a great time or you are suffering here...And explain or provide examples to support what you said.

    All de best,,,

    Just to help you improve ya...there are some spelling mistakes in your blog ^^ don't worry, we all learn from mistakes ya ^^

    Wheather is wrong ya. It should be weather.
    Wenderful should be wonderful.

    There is a dictionary link at the right hand corner of the blog that you can refer to ya ^^

    Besides that, do insert a fullstop (.) at the end of every sentence. For instance: I am a student in MMU. I am from sudan, and ...

    It is important to use proper punctuation ya...

    All de best and never stop writing ya

    regards,
    Ms Jasline ^^

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